Mave's First Pixel Work.

[Maveaxe]

Worked on this on and off since yesterday.
Probably 3 hours total. I'm proud of it though I know it could use more work. :P



I would love some feedback.
If people like this I wouldn't mind working on a full sheet.

[Nurd]

It has a nice idea behind it, i love the line-art but the problem is that there is no shine to it. All armors have shine. Try adding a lot light colours to it to create shine, and it will look so much better, a more like red-plated armor.

[Cirras]

I like it, you have a very nice shape to it.

I suggest darker outlines, and perhaps a smidge more contrast in places to give it shine. You can achieve the contrast by reducing the amount of shades to 3 or 4 per color. (I know that sounds scary, but it works.)

You might have a talent for this, keep at it!

[Violette]

Nice! Looks good for a first try.